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托福写作高分结尾段的技巧

托福写作的开头固然重要,但是对于结尾部分,大家如何能够出彩,也能够为写作带来高分。那么具体的托福写作如何能够写出一个高分的结尾...

  托福写作的开头固然重要,但是对于结尾部分,大家如何能够出彩,也能够为写作带来高分。那么具体的托福写作如何能够写出一个高分的结尾来呢?新东方在线托福网为大家整理了具体的内容,供大家参考。

  一个好的结尾段应该满足如下几个功能:

  1. 重申文章观点;

  2. 总结主体段落的论点;

  3. 升华主题。

  这三个功能在文中如何体现呢?

  请看到如下的例子:

  【题目】Should the money invested into a university library be used to buy books or to buy computers? What do you think? Why?

  【观点】I believe that to invest on computers would be a better choice.

  【结尾段】In conclusion, given that computers have more valuable merits as an efficient, durable, manageable means for libraries of the new century, I therefore reinforce my standpoint to choose computers as my final choice for the investment.

  在这个结尾段,整段就一句话,但实际上它既重申了观点:I therefore reinforce my standpoint to choose computers as my final choice for the investment……

  又总结了主体段落的三个论点理由:computers have more valuable merits as an efficient, durable, manageable means for libraries of the new century.

  这样的结尾段就是符合托福写作基本要求的,全文没有其他大问题的话拿24分都没有问题。那除了这样的结尾方式,我们还有没有其他的写作方法呢?

  请看如下第二个例子:

  题目:Should the money invested into a university library be used to buy books or to buy computers? What do you think? Why?

  结尾段:Admittedly, books do have certain advantages over computers. They are easy to carry than computers. However, computers have more valuable merits as an efficient, durable, manageable means for libraries of the new century.I therefore reinforce my standpoint to choose computers as my final choice for the investment.

  在上面这个结尾段中,第一、二句话先承认了书还是有一定好处的,比如容易携带。

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